or Reflections on the Overthrow of the Lord of the Rings and the Return of the King
[I've been reading Tolkien and Denise Levertov, this is the result. It's a new style, and so it may be clumsy. Writing a bad deep poem is much scarier than writing a bad silly poems--at least it is for me, feedback would be appreciated. More to come in this style.]
  Is everything sad going to come untrue? 
Samwise Gamgee    
No— 
what is true 
will stay true.    
The story will not be rewritten. 
Tears will not cover their tracks 
pretend like nothing happened.    
Sobs will not 
be turned to laughs. 
Up and down 
  will not switch.    
Pain felt 
will not 
be   undone— 
marks left 
will remain.    
But, if there is 
a hope  we can dare 
it is this— 
our tears will make 
our laughs deeper 
pains suffered will make 
smiles  honest.    
And if any 
secret magic 
is revealed 
it will not be 
every sad thing 
come untrue, 
rather, 
sad will   come 
un-sad.
 
 
 
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