tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6338553872037240434.post637487260331045700..comments2023-09-16T05:44:33.824-07:00Comments on The Ent Moot: Edmonds MarinaAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01974263525233864964noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6338553872037240434.post-63595850567618870862008-03-08T01:09:00.000-08:002008-03-08T01:09:00.000-08:00Jake. The wonderful attention you pay to sound in ...Jake. The wonderful attention you pay to sound in this poem floored me. "LICK our ice cream LOOKING at BOATS POINT out the ones we LIKE." "Broken marriages and mortgage payments" Goll-dang. You worked the sounds good. This is beautiful. Sounds like you're an old skilled master poet -- like W.H. Auden or something. A classicist. I'm just in awe of your phenomenal SOUNDS.E Ballhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13352583486344377503noreply@blogger.com